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The air is
conflicted by
contrasting scents:
the sharpness of fire,
the cool, gritty mud.
You feel the heat
behind Plexiglas
windows, as earthbound
thunderheads
unfurl like chiffon
hems from a
cream couture dress.
The sparks are licking
and biting at the
clay colored sky.
She would look perfect
just standing at the
edge of the fire.
conflicted by
contrasting scents:
the sharpness of fire,
the cool, gritty mud.
You feel the heat
behind Plexiglas
windows, as earthbound
thunderheads
unfurl like chiffon
hems from a
cream couture dress.
The sparks are licking
and biting at the
clay colored sky.
She would look perfect
just standing at the
edge of the fire.
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My teacher said he wanted to see more of the fire. Can you see it?
I think I should drop the fifth stanza...
HARSH CRITIQUE PLZ.
My teacher said he wanted to see more of the fire. Can you see it?
I think I should drop the fifth stanza...
HARSH CRITIQUE PLZ.
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